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Thomastown Primary School

 

Chocolate
Tastes smooth
It sounds like RnB beating
In your sleek low rider car.
go

Jacob, James, Junior.

 

 

Indigo
Indigo tastes like blueberry pie.
Indigo smells like expensive perfume.
Indigo sounds like clouds crying.
Indigo feels like a warm robe.
Indigo is stormy weater.

Jade, Princess, Maddy, Jocelyn and Jolene.

 

Silver
Is a crystal in a cave.
Rain pelting down on the roof.
It is a taste of victory.
The freezing touch of snow.

 

 

 

Lime
Lime looks like the beautiful green parts of the earth from space.
Lime sounds like a fizzy green drink that you just opened.
Lime tastes like a lemon not ready to eat.
It smells like sour grass.

Raymond, Dean, Angelo, Dylan and Steven.

I asked Year 11 students at Wadonga West to write five images for bad love - no explanations, just images. They then picked their favourite and wrote a group bad love poem.

 
Bad Love
Have a whinge love
Late love
Playing empty cricket love
Empty bank account love
Peeling hands love
Bad breath in the morning love
Cold Monday love
Forgive me, for I have sinned love
Improper love
Dogs barking in the night love
Reject shop love
Look bu can't touch love
Broken string love
On the list love
The only love
Can't get enough love
Hateful words love
Like falling over painful love
Sand in your shoe love
One night love
Earn while you learn love
Hair raising nail biting love
Clean the kitchen love
Don't tell my father love

By: Brooke, Jamie, Shaun, Luke C., Dean, Leigh, Aron, Michael, Mitchell, Luke G., Robert, Cindy, Danielle, Kade, Sarah, Sian, Kerrina, Chris, Asheley, Tara, Sheree, Sarah, Amanda and Kylie. Don't you love that last line - putting it all into perspective! Brought back memories for me, of sneaking in to the house a little later than I had promised!

 
Bad Love
Worried sick love
Love that's kept in the closet
Stain on your new pants love
Smelly locker room love
Pimple on first date love
Eating with mouth open love
Real emotional love
Stupid camera love
Love that tries to rule your life
Broken heart love
Spew your guts love
Bad timing love
Sick in the guts love
Trashed love
Stab in the back love
Copycat love
Lazy and unwilling love
No beer in the fridge love.

Year 11 Wadonga West
And another great last line - laconically adding a very Australian voice to the whole poem.

Individual "bad love" poems

A couple of students handed me individual "bad love" poems.


Love
Bad timing love
Too busy love
Hatred of love
Annoying people love
Drunken hangover love
Rainy day love
Broken zipper love
Failed exam love
Embarrasing love
yearning love
Falling over love
Kick in the teeth love
Closed off love
Worrying about love
Not loving love

Ben Townsend, Year 11, V5 - Wadonga West College. Ben's images of bad love were terrific - his images create a litany of bad loves and the last line is an apt conclusion.

Voices on the Coast

No food - no nothing
For poor people to consume
Why do they suffer?

Katie Miller,
Bribie Island High School

 

Loreto Mandeville Hall

Lists

 
8 reasons to stay alive!

1. To experience the serenity of the Amazon rainforest.
2. Falling in love.
3. Spring = the bright colour of spring and the warm sun.
4. Literature - so many books with different messages.
5. Friendship - fun and laughter knowing that there is someone who cares.
6. Being successful in your career.
7. Family - knowing you belong somewhere.
8. Learning about other people and tolerating their cultures.

by Marka K., Victoria C., Vanessa B. and Alexandra R.

Good reasons to stay alive, girls!


10 things to do on your lonesome

1. Go skipping through a field filled with sun flowers and tulips up to your neck.
2. Dress up like a fairy and go shoe shopping...retail therapy is always good.
3. Climb on rooftops and go down peoples chimneys.
4. Buy $100.00 worth of dark chocolate and swim in it.
5. Slide down a bowling alley and see what is out the back.
6. Lick the trays at Maccas.
7. Get locked inside a shopping centre.
8. Be a boy for a day.
9. Dye your hair hot pink.
10. Drown a tea towel.

by Geno Brady, Fiona England, Danielle Kielty and Maria Irving, Year 8 Red.

Love the idea of swimming in dark chocolate!

Ruyton Girls' School

A Bird's Song

Anna, Georgie, Maddie, Alice, Katherine, Elizabeth.


A Poem
Today is a soft and fluffy yellow
A church bell ringing
The word sunshine
The Macarena dance
Today I flew through the day

A Poem
Today I flew under a house
Dreaming of the way boats drift and play
Away from winter grumps and into life
And I was part of the world turning and spinning
I could hear the noise of the breathing soft and gentle
And everything around me paused.


Colours of the Rainbow

Lauren, Olivia, Sarah, Chelsey.


My Baby Blue Day
Today is Baby Blue
And the day is young and free
The winds call is like the strumming of a harp
I feel like waltzing to the sound of the wind
Today I soared through the day

Dancing Under A Rainbow
Today I danced under a rainbow
Dreaming of the way colours drift and sway
Away from winter grumps and into happiness
And I was part of the sun turning and swirling
I could hear the noise of the birds soft and gentle
And everything around me drifted


Gchee

Elizabeth C, Gabrielle B, Hannah M, Emily B, Caitlin S.


Bad Day
Today is a slimy green
With angry drums
The word nerds
Dancing the nutcake
Today I punched through the day

Mixed Up
Today I swam under a wave
Dreaming of the way batman’s drift and fly
Away from winter grumps and into spring
And I was part of the petal turning and spinning
I could hear the noise of the catwomen soft and purring
And everything around me scared

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